From: Michael Orlitzky <michael@orlitzky.com>
Date: Wed, 24 Apr 2024 10:58:04 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: doc/man1/list-remote-forwards.1: reword the first paragraph
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doc/man1/list-remote-forwards.1: reword the first paragraph
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diff --git a/doc/man1/list-remote-forwards.1 b/doc/man1/list-remote-forwards.1
index 39042e3..851cd60 100644
--- a/doc/man1/list-remote-forwards.1
+++ b/doc/man1/list-remote-forwards.1
@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@ A list of addresses that are forwarded to remote domains.
 .SH DESCRIPTION
 .P
 A list of local domains is supplied to the program (more or less)
-through the \fI\-\-domain\-query\fR option. Any addresses which
-forward to another address not contained in this list of local domains
-is considered a remote forward. Remote forwards can cause problems for
-a number of reasons, the most common of which are,
+through the \fI\-\-domain\-query\fR option. Any addresses in the list
+that forward to an address \fBnot\fR in the list are considered remote
+forwards. Remote forwards can cause problems for a number of reasons,
+the most common of which are,
 .IP \(bu 2
 If the sender has an SPF record authorizing his mail server to send
 mail on his behalf, then when his message is forwarded by the
@@ -47,7 +47,8 @@ SQL query used to produce a list of local domains. This should return
 the set of all domains (i.e one column) that are local to the
 server. See the default value for an example.
 
-Default: \(dqSELECT domain FROM domain WHERE domain <> 'ALL' ORDER BY domain;\(dq
+Default: \(dqSELECT domain FROM domain WHERE domain <> 'ALL' ORDER BY
+domain;\(dq
 
 .IP \fB\-\-exclude-mx\fR,\ \fB-e\fR
 The name of a mail exchanger, the forwards of whose domains we should